Many of my questions are closed due to my English is awkward. Being non native English speaker it is very difficult for me to write like native English speakers. But I am continuously trying my best to improve my English. So some times I don't understand what is the wrong with my sentence. Can I ask community what is the wrong with my sentences when compared to corrected version? Is it allowed and acceptable to SE as per SE guidelines.
For example, if I write a sentence like "How to make my verbal communication simple and clear?" at the same time some one corrects it like "How can I make verbal communication simple and clear?". I can accept that it is better, but I'm having trouble understanding why my original wording was inferior. Is there a relatively easy explanation? Is it allowed to ask SE community about this kind of explanation? Is it accepted as per the SE guidelines?